poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Thank You

Thank you for everything,
May I dare to say something?
Not kind or unkind like thing,
Love is only kind we find in living being,

I was no where near sanity,
Neither thirsty nor felt guilty,
It was misconception to feel pity,
Kind heart with face so pretty,

Love can never be silly,
Can rose be ever being Lilly?
Rose is king of flowers,
No equal, parallel or answer,

Love is not kind to forget,
Always in mind and heart so set,
Nothing will matter or appeal,
Even offer marriage or idea I repeal,

May not be her true intention?
To prepare for initial prevention,
Never did she said or mention,
Her plan for permanent desertion,

Nothing goes as per scheme and plan,
Nor any body can put temporary ban,
Once it is not in our hands or luck,
How can we lament for loss or work?

I have firm faith and belief,
HE may grant me solace and relief,
I must stand and face,
No question of loosing the race,

I must refrain from accusing,
Stop on thoughts and arguing,
Pray for her comforts and stay,
Living far and far away,

Nothing can take away or demolish,
I may live and not perish,
Memory in mind always to cherish,
Task not easy and yet to finish

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011

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  • Kashi Paul (10/6/2009 10:15:00 PM)

    Love can never be silly,
    Can rose be ever being Lilly?
    Rose is king of flowers,

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  • Umesh Lalvani (10/6/2009 9:46:00 PM)

    Nothing goes as per scheme and plan,
    Nor any body can put temporary ban,
    Once it is not in our hands or luck,

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  • Suresh Vakil (10/2/2009 7:52:00 AM)

    was no where near sanity,
    Neither thirsty nor felt guilty,
    It was misconception to feel pity,
    Kind heart with face so pretty,

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  • Argum Sheth (8/19/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    thank always for evrything....10

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  • Durga Sethani (8/19/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    you should thank every body....10

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  • Rupa Shah (8/16/2009 9:00:00 PM)

    offer thanks withsmile....10

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  • Jayant Manik (8/14/2009 8:44:00 AM)

    always thank a aperson....10

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  • Kant Shri (8/14/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    u must thank after work is done....10

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  • Ratna Patel (8/1/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    Nothing goes as per scheme and plan,
    Nor any body can put temporary ban,
    u should always thank...10

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  • Ritul Soni (8/1/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    Not kind or unkind like thing, tks to be given after finish of the work done...10

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  • Pittle Shaileja (7/28/2009 11:21:00 PM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    always thank for...10

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  • Kamlesh Ambalal (7/27/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    Not kind or unkind like thing,
    Love is only kind we find in living being,

    must always thank for good wrok...10

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  • Trevor William (7/27/2009 9:11:00 AM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    Not kind or unkind like thing...always thank for favoiur done...10

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  • Bharati Bhikhubhai (7/26/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    Not kind or unkind like thing,
    Love is only kind we find in living being,

    weshould always thank to a person after good work done...10

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  • Sejal Kapadia (7/22/2009 8:11:00 PM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    Not kind or unkind like thing,
    Love is only kind we find in living being,
    it is coutsey to respond with tks....10

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  • Pradip Pillai (7/21/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    Not kind or unkind like thing,
    Love is only kind we find in living being,

    I was no where near sanity,
    .....tks for everything....10

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  • Dalsukh S (7/21/2009 10:37:00 PM)

    was no where near sanity,
    ...must thank always...10

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  • Vinod Karmakar (7/21/2009 10:33:00 PM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    must thabnk alwayas for everything....10

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  • Chand Shikari (7/19/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    one must thank for evrything...10

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  • Bhanubhai Montu Shah (7/18/2009 9:04:00 AM)

    Thank you for everything,
    May I dare to say something?
    Not kind or unkind like thingtks for the good poem..10

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