Friday, November 2, 2012

Thank You, Loneliness Comments

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when I say Good Bye to the closest friend in the sunset
I feel lonely

the loneliness must be a reminder
not to take him for granted in my life
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COMMENTS
Elena Sandu 08 November 2012

Brilliantly said! What an original surprising turn! Lovely! Thank you!

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Unwritten Soul 02 November 2012

Great! Oh how i felt it so deep by those words...you did amazing job Sabee_soul

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Hans Vr 02 November 2012

Wonderful thought, expressed in this short poem. I fully agree. We can learn from our feelings, positive and negative alike. Excellent

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