when I say Good Bye to the closest friend in the sunset
I feel lonely
the loneliness must be a reminder
not to take him for granted in my life
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Great! Oh how i felt it so deep by those words...you did amazing job Sabee_soul
Wonderful thought, expressed in this short poem. I fully agree. We can learn from our feelings, positive and negative alike. Excellent
Brilliantly said! What an original surprising turn! Lovely! Thank you!