Anele TheAfrikanSon kaMthethungqongqo Potelwa

Rookie - 0 Points (1992 March 03 / South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town))

That Dream Of All Times - Poem by Anele TheAfrikanSon kaMthethungqongqo Potelwa

It was hard to wake up
From a moment that took time to build up
And voices were silenced by my thoughts
As I read through the atter

A grave of tears
Is what busted along my chick
And the fantasy of reality was all gone
How I wish to go back to the world

A dream unforgettable
A life unbelievable
I died the a cold death
That left me so isolated

But as my heart ponded
optimism responded
But I live to tell a story
Of the dream amongst others
Hoping one day it will come true


Comments about That Dream Of All Times by Anele TheAfrikanSon kaMthethungqongqo Potelwa

  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (8/2/2012 9:38:00 AM)


    A moment will avail
    And the time will come
    A peak we will reach
    And a downswing shall we fullfil

    you dont simply write you just make them feel like amendments.....
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  • Neela Nath Das (5/5/2012 11:12:00 AM)


    Dream-seller! So nice dream that you won't be able to supply it according to the demand! The everlasting flame of optimism is burning in your write. (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2012 12:07:00 PM)


    Great poem.I am impressed by the dream like quality of this work Well done my brother (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2012 2:44:00 PM)


    It will come true my friend! no matter how crowded the sky may be with stars, you'll find yourself among them one day.....great poem mngani wam. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 2, 2012



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