That Little Voice Comments

Peeppeep if for a tiny reason come and play peepeep if for any small reason do please stay!

I like this better, than the other one. I hope you're not too depressed? Next one maybe about light and life? May I be this bold, to make such a request?

Beautiful train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Thaison.

It's that little voice only I can hear The voice that says it's nearby the end Trust me and give me your hand I will lead you into the darkness of the night And there will be no more fight No more thoughts, no more pain - E' quella vocina che solo io posso udire La voce che annuncia che la fine è vicina Fidati di me, dammi la mano Ti condurrò nel buio della notte E non ci sarà più lotta alcuna Né più pensieri, né più dolore - Thanks for sharing, Aaralyn, and keep on posting Ciao dall'Italia Fabrizio

A lovely poem, Aaralyn. Thanks for sharing