The violins held sweet melodies
as they played romantic tunes.
Rose petals rained down from the sky
on the couple on the floor.
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Moonlight, violins, and roses-What could be more romantic? Enchanting mood. Ten for all three of you. Warmest regards, Sandra
Wonderful read, great teamwork here! Everything seemed just right - on that moonlit night! Thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad
So beautiful and romantic poetry at it's best, wonderful work my friends.. Andy 10+
I think the intention here is delicious, to show that waiting...anticipating...feeling, but I must admit, I am a bit distracted by some of the halting sentence structure and the grammar? I think an overhaul of that would GREATLY improve the meaning and feeling of this one. Good work, however! !
It's interesting to try and work out which of your wrote which line. I do believe that the three creative souls have so coalesced that three become one. A delightful romantic piece lit by the light of the moon. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥