That Past Day.......... Poem by Pramod Kumar

That Past Day..........

Rating: 5.0


That past day, when i remember
Sometimes brings tears in eyes
Sometimes make me happy

That past day, reminds me
How we came close together,
With a lot of fear & shame.

That past day, reminds me of
Her sweet kisses in trembling lips,
Her strong hugs with closing eyes,
Her warm breaths.

After all little drops of tears in her eyes.


Pramod Kumar

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

That past day, reminds me of Her sweet kisses in trembling lips, Her strong hugs with closing eyes, Her warm breaths. this is passionate and very cute I like it a lot. yes written very well. good job. Becca

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Raindreamer Hippy 18 December 2008

Very deep and passionate! I love it!

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brittany 19 December 2008

very sweet......... i love it. good job with it and post some more! nice job!

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 21 December 2008

wow supperb feeling yaar...lovely and very cute one...... keep writing

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 26 July 2009

Awesomely written..you've penned it well...XOXO

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Elizabeth Douglas 17 June 2009

sounds really sad and you heartbroken.....good mood and effects

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Lucero Flores 13 June 2009

Beautiful Peom, I enjoy reading that peom. That is how I have bin feeling sadly, Very good, hopefully you have a new peom soon i would love to know what you have to write about soon!

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

those were the memories of yesterdays.a beautiful poem.keep writing..grace

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Rudy Hossam 04 January 2009

Very sweet...how u descibed the days with her...hope u get back together

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