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Do not open a door,
You cannot close.
For it is within the door,
You will find many foes.
The Ghosts of Past,
Lay dormant, sleeping.
The echoing woes,
of the Ghouls that are weeping.
We shall not, but enter,
The 5th Dimension.
For entering that door,
Bring more suffering than to mention.
But if you do attempt,
To open the door.
You will find all but Peace,
Danger is within it's core.
The 5th Dimension,
Though in a great Slumber.
Is filled with tension,
And pain in great Number...
So please do not,
Open the door.
For this is a sacrifice,
Worth dying for.
Pandora's Box, was given,
Kept closed.
And if she would open,
The Evil would enclose...
Upon the land,
The Evil would roam.
You understand,
This is what they called Home.
But please do not enter,
The 5 dimension.
The dangers within,
Are none that are worth mention.
There are however,
Those that are trapped.
Lost in Time,
The bloodline of Ancient's Mapped.
The 5th Dimension,
Was closed long ago.
I have gotten your attention,
Yet, there are things you should know.
For when you Open,
The 5th Dimension.
The Evil will spread,
And the Holy be primary Attention.
So please do not,
Open that door.
For if it is opened,
You will die for sure.
Immediately caught mine attention from beginning to end. Fascinatingly beautiful!
2. While repeating some lines and words in the poem add to its aesthetic beauty, some look superfluous. We need to be very careful in using this as a tool.
Lovely poignant poem. Faintly philosophical, but largely exhorting. There is one suggestion: The very first stanza is adequately suggestive of "Pandora's Box". So the reference to it later on in the poem could be avoided.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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