Tuesday, March 22, 2011

The Abandoned Soldier Comments

Rating: 3.1

youthful face, innocent cares,
wide eyed child, infant stares.

child grew up, played soldier games,
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Chinedu Dike 16 October 2017

War as man inhumanity to man is aptly captured in the piece. It's heart touching sad story impressively narrated in a good poem with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Mark and do remain blessed.

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