The Addiction Poem by Dakota Russell

The Addiction

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Smoke fills the body and forms an artificial friendship
The mind fooled with the addictions persuasive ways

A thought flies through the brain like a razor blade
Blood slowly fills the head
A death that is to come

The assassin hidden in a paper and deep within the tobacco
Its method of murder
Slow…
Painful…
Unavoidable…

When it hits us its too late
The weight of years of the addiction
Its true identity comes through the smoke witch has concealed it for years


An assassin hidden
Slowly acting against us
The counterfeit friendship
The bond still not broken even though the truth has been unsheltered
Death the outcome of an awful friend

Wednesday, January 30, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,assassin,friendship,identity,murder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thai Russell 03 July 2008

Craigs comment is NOT about the poetry. Poetry, like all art forms, is a freedom of expression, an individuals thoughts on any particular subject. A view he/she shares Personaly or socially. Again, really well written! Your a natural Dakota!

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Craig Steiger 30 January 2008

you say 'slow... painful... unavoidable....' but my friend, tobacco IS avoidable- I've accomplished it meself. CS

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