The Beach.... Poem by Apurva Agnihotri

The Beach....

Rating: 4.5


Walking on the beach on the soft sand..
Warm and at places wet..
A cool.. but a bit salty breeze.. blows...
At times bringing the scent of the ship that just left....
Leaving me on this island.. alone.. with my thoughts..
As i lift a small shell lying on the ground..
And i lift another.. and another.. which leads me to a big shell..
Where underneath a heart... beats..
I sit there.. smiling.. near my new discovery..
And see the sea water.. wash away the foot marks i just left behind..
As the wind keeps blowing..

Wednesday, September 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: places,beach,leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 16 June 2014

When the biggest truth is revealed the illusions appeared like foot prints are washed away. A nice poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 December 2013

This is a nice poem. I have rated it 9/10. 'A cool.. but a bit salty breeze.. blows... At times bringing the scent of the ship that just left.... ' Nice depiction.

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Marvin Brato 03 October 2013

To be remembered is to write poems that soothes the soul, this is like a footprint that can not be wash away!

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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2013

A soft, soothing poem like a cool breeze.

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Shraddha The Poetess 11 September 2013

vryy nice.description... good to read it..... i invite u to read my poetries..........

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