The Beating Of The Sun Poem by Chris Tiganescu

The Beating Of The Sun

Rating: 5.0


I feel the sun trickling down my
neck, this day's heats puts my
mind at a blank, trickling sweat,
anger, the fire that builds inside,
as strong as the suns violent rays,
my back aches my eyes water,
my throat rigged with dehydration,
exhaustion and sadness are placed
on me, i have a weary soul, thou
who feels the beating of the sun, feels
the anguish of man, turmoil as hot
as the day, a fight with oneself to
restrain to not induce pain in thyself
but instead to open your heart to
the wonders of this ever changing
world, my body and mind grow as
fast as this earths fertile ground.
the day proceeds, yet no sign of
the calming cool breeze.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deja Rupp 14 July 2010

Baby your so incredible at description i love you so much never stop writing(:

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Incredable imagery that brings this beautiful work to life. Well done my friend.

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Chris Tiganescu

Chris Tiganescu

Portland, Oregon
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