Wednesday, June 28, 2023

The Big One Comments

Rating: 5.0

you tempt the grave to face the wave
the one that wakes Poseidon
the surf is up your fears locked up
as your heart beat starts to ripen
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Kevin Patrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 July 2023

' You tempt the grave to face the wave' great opening line from an unforgettable poem. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 July 2023

What a beautiful poem with superb imagery! So gripping, I could feel the fury of a giant wave. Each and every stanza delivers an unforgettable scene.

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