The Birds Comments

2 - " Bachman Academy was a co-ed college-preparatory school.. It served to provide a non-traditional educational environment for students with learning differences, but who had average to above average intelligence." (i edited this from Wikipedia; the school closed in 2017 due, in part, to public schools providing more help for such students. It is listed as poet’s ‘Education’.) bri :)

1 - " when their not there" oops. they're not i've always heard " flock" , not " stick" . " The Origin of 'Birds of a Feather Flock Together' It was in use as far back as the mid-16th century." i understand poem well enough and i really like birds, but this doesn't LOOK like a poem. maybe you can call yours " punctuation-free po-et-ry" ? bri :)

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful work of art.