Saturday, December 2, 2006

The Bleeding Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh my little one, my heart still bleeds
Since you left in a deep, deep sleep.
I still recall the saddest part,
Because it still lives deep inside my heart.
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Rita Valentine
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Cunningham Mbati 15 February 2013

Wow so sweet...I like it.

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Marvin Brato 25 April 2007

Though this poem expressed sorrowful event, yet it enlightened the hearts of those whose love ones have departed. Life maybe short, but it has a purpose and full of lessons to learn from. God gives life, and life God takes. Write more inspiring poems my dear.10 for it.

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Malini Kadir 19 April 2007

May your sorrow find an outlet in your verses to come.....and may you learn to live on......most touching poetry my dear....................

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Catastrophe King 12 March 2007

SOUL-STIRRING..... May I join my hands in prayer with you! May the almighty give you more strength..... God Bless!

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