Oh my little one, my heart still bleeds
Since you left in a deep, deep sleep.
I still recall the saddest part,
Because it still lives deep inside my heart.
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Though this poem expressed sorrowful event, yet it enlightened the hearts of those whose love ones have departed. Life maybe short, but it has a purpose and full of lessons to learn from. God gives life, and life God takes. Write more inspiring poems my dear.10 for it.
May your sorrow find an outlet in your verses to come.....and may you learn to live on......most touching poetry my dear....................
SOUL-STIRRING..... May I join my hands in prayer with you! May the almighty give you more strength..... God Bless!
Wow so sweet...I like it.