The Bleeding Zone Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The Bleeding Zone

Rating: 5.0


Wanting to be pleasing,
Decreasing all the pain they own!
Getting rid of plastic issues.
Tied to hollow dreams...
And teased to further debt,
And loans.
Moaning in a sick
Constant droan!

Dawn has come...
To send a mending healing!
Faith has shown,
There is now an ending...
Seen to what has been condoned,
In the bleeding zone!

Wishing a quick split,
From heartbreaks that visit.
And kicking habits they once owned.
Forced isolation meant...
They spent in good intent,
To scrub temptations off their bones!
And do this all alone!

Dawn has come...
To send a mending healing!
Faith has shown,
There is now an ending...
To gather strength as strong as stone!
And cleanse their blood away,
From the bleeding zone!

Stains that kept them chained...
To drain their brains,
In the bleeding zone!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 06 October 2006

Hi Lawrence, Very different and creative. I am not sure I will be honest what this write refers too, sorry excellent write just the same. Take care.

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