The Blue Dance Poem by Kevin Patrick

The Blue Dance

Rating: 5.0


Sitting on a grassy knoll
Watching a mans head explode
Blood rains from an open wound sky
my hearts steel, and I feel fine.


And every night I dream I fly
why? because I need never hide
through the clouds I soar wingless and free
to breath the air and be me

Wednesday, May 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: day
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 July 2018

An imaginative poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Mj Lemon 11 June 2018

A police officer...a bald eagle....could they have been present and witnesses in 1963? There's an amazing tangle of symbolism and suspense in your words, this amazing verse. There is the suggestion that freedom is elusive. Simply magnificent, Kevin.

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A thought provoking poem. Compelling imagery.10

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Robert Murray Smith 23 May 2018

An imaginative write with great imagery. +++10 Robert

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