The Breaking Poem by to those who wonder what life is about

The Breaking

Rating: 5.0


I'm not a perfect young lady
for I have made many mistakes
I have been torn
I have been lost
I have been broken in to many pieces
people have tried to put me
back together with their
words and love
for it is only a short time
before i break agian

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zen Bojczuk 10 February 2007

I have some superglue and duct tape. Needle and thread too. Forget where I put the map and compass... oh wait - Here is the GPS. Zen

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Brian Dorn 09 February 2007

Good write, Catilina... nice expression of human fraility and imperfection. Well done. Brian

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Ray Mesa 09 February 2007

Creative, A very creative way to express the support from others. To say they are 'placeing you back together' Ray-

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