The Bridge Comments
While walking past the gigantic waves, splashing before my eyes;
I stopped across the swirling tides, questioning it's premise;
I plunged my little eyes, unraveling before the tremendous crests;
And explored just a wooden chunk, be the premise of God's immortal quest.
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Awesome diction and flight of imagery. Hats off. Enjoyed reading the thought provoking and meaningful poem penned by an adolescent of my grand son's age. Thanks for sharing.10+++
Many many Thanks for writing me such an inspiring comment that shall definitely encourage me to write more.......Really thankful to your encouraging words........
Very amazing poem shared definitely with wise mind. Interesting.10
Many many Thanks for writing me such a spell bounding comment.......Thank you.....
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3/13/2026 2:03:14 PM # 1.0.0
You have a talent to become a real poet.But in poems leave aside supernatural unexistent existence.Find basis in determinism if you want to offer to mankind's history something great you can.