Ashutosh Dash


The Bridge - Poem by Ashutosh Dash

While walking past the gigantic waves, splashing before my eyes;
I stopped across the swirling tides, questioning it's premise;
I plunged my little eyes, unraveling before the tremendous crests;
And explored just a wooden chunk, be the premise of God's immortal quest.


Being frightened of these gigantic waves, I ran across the rocky inclines;
Taking up my densest breathe, being thankful to God's premise;
I ran down across the greenest plains, that lay before the swirling waves;
And slowed down my little feet, struck by a thoughtful enclave.


When I could extend my curious eyes, through the vicinity of the entangling tides;
I could explore the true oceanic landforms, circulating before my eyes;
The ocean, the solvent, that dissolves the entire gleam of religion;
And emerge together as a wooden chunk, sublimating a path towards salvation.


My thoughts did inculcate transmitting, the massive glimpse of creation;
And explore an immortal element, inducing Almighty's mysterious inception;
The inception that dissolves, the entire glimpse of humanity;
And emerge together as the glorious path, approaching peacefulness and empathy.


Oh! God, I am ignorant, ignorant of the enormous ocean, I thrive in;
Even ignorant of every element, I am just an innocent lignin;
Do guide me across this ocean, let my little hands held the palm of yours;
Show me that elegant bridge, approaching your immortal erudite endures.

ASHUTOSH DASH
CLASS-VIII
RUCHIKA HIGH SCHOOL

Topic(s) of this poem: nature


Comments about The Bridge by Ashutosh Dash

  • Dimitrios Galanis (1/11/2016 11:39:00 AM)


    You have a talent to become a real poet.But in poems leave aside supernatural unexistent existence.Find basis in determinism if you want to offer to mankind's history something great you can. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/5/2015 10:02:00 AM)


    Awesome diction and flight of imagery. Hats off. Enjoyed reading the thought provoking and meaningful poem penned by an adolescent of my grand son's age. Thanks for sharing.10+++ (Report) Reply

    Ashutosh Dash (12/12/2015 8:53:00 AM)

    Many many Thanks for writing me such an inspiring comment that shall definitely encourage me to write more.......Really thankful to your encouraging words........

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/5/2015 9:59:00 AM)


    Very amazing poem shared definitely with wise mind. Interesting.10 (Report) Reply

    Ashutosh Dash (12/12/2015 8:54:00 AM)

    Many many Thanks for writing me such a spell bounding comment.......Thank you.....

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015



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