I stood praying
For a long time
Not an icon was before
Only the image of you dear.
The raindrops
Pierce into my heart
The thundering
Make me vigilant.
The gleaming lightning
Shows the way for me.
Ripples...No..
The waves wipe my grieves
Even the flurry seems
To be hugging me fiercely.
The love still
Floats, no fluttering
No ritzy life
No riotous moments
So calm, So cool.
Good poem. I got a bit confused though. First verse impression a serious heartbreak but the last gives the impression there is hugs and kisses. Aaah ok you are having fun with memory of the guy not the guy which is why its a heart. Ok understood. M i bad?
The poet, through his fascinating images in the midst of raindrops, proves that the nature is a great healer to the grieving hearts including those of the lovers. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful beginning for a broken heart praying and rain drops pierce into my heart.... beautiful. And the closing no ritzy life...no riotous moment...do calm so cool..... magnificent close. Every one should attend. Beautiful. Thank-you sir.