The Bus To My College Comments

This is so real... buses are so crowded you don't even get a small place to stand! Anyways the poem is really nice and kind of funny... Aditi

an indian poem....learning ballet was'nt so much fun...nice humor...beautiful narration..10

You knw what, you're the only poet that I've ever known who could take inspiration from a crowded bus & write such a humorous poem... Love it..! ! Keep up the good work.... ^_^

sweet memories, aren't they?

A wonderful Poem and written like a true Poet. You have communicated about your daily travel in such a few words, and so well you get the experience you are there! Nice choice of words and excellent rhythm. Wish our planners developed this aspect. 10+++ Sreedevi

''I did envy those sitting souls, Their sweats worth the queen’s throne. It struck, the freedom bell And I packed my lungs a third.'' nice poem.........