The Call Poem by Nomad Omnia

The Call

Rating: 2.6


I lifted the bag
I thought held all
I needed
But as I turned,
I heard you call:

“You’re such a nomad! ”

And you looked at me
In the strangest way.

That’s when I knew it:
You would make me stay.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 24 August 2009

You have mastered the art of simplicity. Succinct, but compelling. Warm regards, Sandra

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Patti Masterman 16 August 2009

This one took us right inside your brain, and told us so much more that you never had to say at all.

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Sonya Florentino 12 August 2009

a lot said and unsaid... very nice.. but does that mean you'll be changing your name now? i kinda like Nomad....

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HaZeM PaKKaR 12 August 2009

very well written.. short but wit.. it also has a hidden scenario.. thanks truly for sharing! !

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I Am Charlie 12 August 2009

ah. Simple, but packed. all those implications...I do like.

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