The Captive Poem by Ritesh Agarwal

The Captive

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A thunderous noise shook the dark house
Rattled the window pane, disturbed the sleeping walls
I woke up with a terrifying jolt.
A shriek
I swear I heard a shriek
Or was it a fancy, that mournful cry?
As the chandelier swayed
And the night sky hissed
It came again
I swear it came again
Unsettling and urgent
A cry of lament, almost insidious.
It was a soul,
It was the soul.
Yet again,
It moaned and groaned
It slithered in its narrow room.
Lifting its sharp finger, it knocked.
Softly.
Then despairingly
It pounded at my ribcage…..

Sunday, September 17, 2017
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 October 2017

Beautifully drafted..nice imaginative faculty..the flow is astounding! I loved the piece of work! ! Full marks

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Ritesh. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 17 September 2017

A cry of lament, almost insidious. It was a soul, It was the soul. A thrilling poem, keeping the heart horror struck. Thanks for sharing it. 10+

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