The Carrion Tree Poem by Amelie Ison

The Carrion Tree

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-For Burns

Hanging from its branches,
The tree bears them like glorious fruits—
Laden with corpses rotting: old and new.
Their eyes glazed over, forever spewing agony—
All in various stages of decay;
Dripping blood from their slick fur.
It must have been their eyes, black like buttons,
That drew you in. The whole forest closed in around you—
But, in the end, it was a voice
That brought you back to the carrion tree.

Slowly, you released the corpses one by one
And arranged them into a circle.
Now they could dissolve into the earth
Like they were supposed to.
Longing to be with them, you rid yourself of your clothes
And lay down—naked as the day you were born—
In the centre of your new companions.
You would dissolve with them
To gratefully give your body back to the earth;

While, above you—through the tracery of branches—
The sky darkened and the air grew colder.
Still, it didn't occur to you to move.
This was the right place:
This was where you had wanted to be—
Surrounded by the fragility of death
And at peace with the elements.

Saturday, June 15, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: animals,human and animal,death,cycle,life,acceptance,mortality,tree,earth,forest,rain,war,fragility,free,inner peace,trauma,broken
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about the cycle of life and death. It is about a search for inner peace during trauma and the acceptance of mortality. It is written for Burns (a character in the book 'Regeneration' by Pat Barker) as it is inspired by him and an extremely similar encounter he has in the book. If you've read it then you probably know the one.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dennis Ryan 18 June 2024

Enjoy wallowing in your misery. Hope you had a great day!

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Dennis Ryan 18 June 2024

The poem "Whilest You Die" echoes this one, you placing the crow in the former poem "high up" to protect it against the cats. Where? In your carrion tree, the crow soon to become carrion, right? Sick.

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Kevin Hulme 17 June 2024

I like the way you put things. Very good.

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Amelie Ison 19 June 2024

Thank you. I appreciate it.

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