The Chariot Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

The Chariot

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I saw a chariot with fiery wings.
It flew and flew from the mighty white skies.

And came to me
the humble victim of cruel humanity.

From the chariot rose the Angel of fire
and called me with a smile

“Come my sweet innocent one
Everything that touches you shall burn you
until you burn eternally.“

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mariette Singer 27 June 2010

From the chariot rose the Angel of fire and called me with a smile “Come my sweet innocent one Everything that touches you shall burn you until you burn eternally.“ the image of the chariot is in bible and also in hinduism.. you are presenting your experience of God with the image of an angel, fire and chariot and wonderful words uttered to you by the angel.. wonderful imagery. thank you

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Reminds me of Elijah when he was taken! A powerful write. God Bless

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Tomy Pop 02 June 2010

“Come my sweet innocent one Everything that touches you shall burn you until you burn eternally.“ Burning eternally.......... and an angel strikes you with the sword of light. every thing is divine when you write.

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Rudy We 25 May 2010

biblical notes here. you have a powerful imaginative capacity.. chariot angels fire, flames.. etc. thank you for sharing

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