David Knox

Rookie - 140 Points (honestly why would i tell you? / does it matter?)

The Chornicles Of A Dark Heart Part 1 The Cry - Poem by David Knox

Help help I cry
no one cares why
they just pass me by
day after day
ignored again

i try and open for them
but they lock me in my emotionless pen
Why would they care?
I mean who said life was fair?
whoever did was wrong
and probably didn't live too long
My fate is my demise
even if they let me open my pen or care now
its too late... my fate i cannot break my ties (to it)


Comments about The Chornicles Of A Dark Heart Part 1 The Cry by David Knox

  • (6/20/2007 6:52:00 PM)

    u want the truth? well here it is. most will not care at all. there are few ppl out there that will care. hold on until you find them for they are worth waiting for....or so i am told for i haven't found them either but yah. don; t give up for you never know what you could miss out on. damn now i sound like those ppl who give advice to me lol (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (6/5/2007 11:57:00 PM)

    just try and hold on
    through the darkest nights.
    and when the new day dawns.
    perhaps your heart will feel light.
    so hold on and just wait
    for one day soon somewhere...
    there will be one who will care.~~~~~~~~~~~marci.m.
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2007 5:52:00 PM)

    But the real hero is the one who stands against the tides of time.......

    Juss challenge yourself and don't give it up........

    REst is the BON Jovi Stuff
    (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Friday, June 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 5, 2011


Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]