The Coffin Poem by Kingsley Egbukole

The Coffin

Rating: 5.0

A box of various designs
And design of different sizes
Is my last house
Is your last house
Is our last house
For the big and the small
For the old and the young
For the rich and the poor
For the beautiful and the ugly
For all men and women
Must go into this house

The mansions are for some living
The exotic cars are for some living
The private jets are for some living
The luxurious yachts are for some living
But when the last breath is gone
The Coffin is for all.

(Sunday,12/11/2023,2.14am)

Sunday, November 19, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: house
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 19 November 2023

And I disagree with: 'But when the last breath is gone The Coffin is for all.' NOT ALL can afford the price of a coffin, and some would choose not to have one anyway. Some bodies are 'lost', and left in the wilderness OR....you know. : ) BRI

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2023

(cont.) Some are burned/cremated and put in 'jars' [[ some of what's left of them anyway ]] I Once saw [in a cemetary cremaatorium] a large cardboard box (with body inside I presumed) being burned in a furnace. I was mowing lawn in the cemetary thst day, with other 'day-laborers'. : )

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2023

I find this statement to be untrue: 'all men and women Must go into this house' (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2023

five ***** stars, BUT I disagree with some of the statements. [[ and 'yacht' 'needs' 's' for plural; I have 5 yachts ]] Try my Fun-eral poem if you like humor/humour & sentiment. : ) bri (cont.)

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