The waters around me
are shallow with debris
Unappealing to my taste
The blue rivers inviting
are deep and far removed
Cause fear to take a fetch
How do I quench
the overdue thirst of mine
With peers drinking leisurely to my scorn.
(Monday 24th January,2005,6.56 am)
How do I quench the overdue thirst of mine? Appreciated the fathomless depth of this line! A brilliant poem.5 stars!
" How do I quench the overdue thirst of mine With peers drinking leisurely to my scorn" Great line. Great write my friend!
Conscience, the most important part in us, one of your best poems, Kingsley! I have enjoyed this remarkable poem very much.. Thank you for sharing. A 10 Full Score and much much more! God's Great Blessings for you and your family.
Truth is far away from us and it's very difficult to find it out. A nice metaphor.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful write...as usual.....