The Confirmation Day Poem by Eibhlin Theresa

The Confirmation Day

Rating: 5.0


It was a very, very important day
For Jason and his class
Their teachers prepared them very well
For their Confirmation Mass

The teachings and the doctrines
And parables by the score
All helped to pave the winding way
That leads to the Heavenly Door

Buying ‘the gear’ was another day out
They wanted to look their best
This symbolised the cleanest of souls
From the jacket right into the vest

On the day, they looked like angels
Queuing up for their shower of strength
God knows, one day, they may need it
To fight off life’s little torment

Next there were the monetary gifts
From family and friends
Parents stressed they were unimportant
But I guess that all depends

It was a day for reminiscing
There were people who could not be there
For Jason it was his Nana
Who missed it by one little hair?

No doubt she was watching over
To see that all went well
She was definitely there in spirit
Amazingly we all could tell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 09 November 2009

'The teachings and the doctrines And parables by the score' Rachel Ann Butler

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Philip Lore 27 January 2009

Strong. Good body of words. Great story, I was there watching it. Cried for Nana in heaven. This is a very moving, well written poem that I will cherish. Good job definitely a 10. Break a finger Poet, Philip Lore

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Joseph Poewhit 18 October 2008

Brought back some memos of tha day

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