The Cruel Voice, I Can't Forget Poem by Sara Fliri

The Cruel Voice, I Can't Forget

Rating: 5.0


They came for us with a cruel voice I won't forget
Ripped from the loved ones I can't forget
Buried them in a way I shan‘t forget
With a cruel voice, I'll never forget

When I walk towards a future, I can't forget
That cruel voice I won't forget
The pain I locked away, but I don't forget
Because of the cruel voice, I'll never forget

Searching for freedom I once had and won't forget
Freedom from the shadow, I can't forget
The shadows of my past I shan‘t forget
Because of the cruel voice, I'll never forget

Lock the dreams away, I can't forget
Put pain in a cage I shan‘t forget
Leave my memories behind, I won‘t forget
Because of the cruel voice, I'll never forget

Live with the shadows of a life I can't forget
Buried dreams I don't forget
Searching for the freedom I won't forget
Because of the cruel voice, I'll never forget

Thursday, December 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,holocaust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 January 2018

Write comment. A good start, Sara. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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poemlover123_ 01 January 2018

A stunning piece you have composed here! The imagery was vivid and breathtaking. This is full of emotion and excellently chosen words.

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Chinedu Dike 28 December 2017

A sad reflection on the ugliest man inhumanity to man - the holocaust, insightfully brought forth from the heart with conviction. An ugly story of evil, well articulated and expertly narrated. Thanks for sharing Sara.

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Ariana 04 January 2018

Wow! I like how your words create a powerful impact in this piece. Great imagery and metaphors

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photographe 02 January 2018

i like your imagery in this and the way you connect each one and how strongly vivid it is.

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Langston44 02 January 2018

Oh my goodness, this is both hauntingly sad and beautiful in equal measure.

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edger_ poe 02 January 2018

both powerful and sad- deeply moving, beautifully descriptive

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Maya Lee 2 02 January 2018

A deeply dark and haunting poetic narrative, my friend, congratulations

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