Rabia Fazal

The Cuckoo Bird

The autumn is over.
Naked trees with feeble branches,
are now dressed by blooming flowers
And the leaf, that hatches.
the trees happily dancing
with the ripening mangoes
Or the cuckoo's singing
The music that instantly flows.

It's cheerful voice,
indicating that spring nears
Giving us rejoice
When it strike our ears.
Oh! heavenly creature of God
I know not
You are inspired by what
from which my attentions are caught.

Poem Submitted: Friday, July 2, 2010

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  • Katherine Shaw (8/6/2010 3:11:00 PM)

    I love the way you said a leaf hatches, ...But you said autum is over and spring nears? if autum is over then it IS spring lol x i have more poems posted, please read when you have time, please leave coments and a vote, thanks x

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  • Afzal Shauq (7/15/2010 12:33:00 PM)

    awesome... impressive alot..just keep writing

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  • Rabia Fazal (7/15/2010 12:26:00 PM)

    Thank you for liking it

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (7/2/2010 11:45:00 AM)

    very nice and lovely lines

    cheers

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