How Fortunate Are We! Poem by Rabia Fazal

How Fortunate Are We!

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How fortunate are we!
Born with two eyes to see,
The blooming flowers in the gardens;
The colours of the world and it's beauty.
Born with with two ears,
Hearing the singing of the birds,
And various sounds we hear.
Born with a mouth to speak; Yet
Comfort is what we seek,
Negating the truth that:
How fortunate are we!

How fortunate are we!
Adored by our lovely family,
Pampered by our parents
Arguing with our siblings; Yet
they are the ones with whom we,
Share our feelings.
Oh! My lord, how ungrateful am I.
For riding the horse so high,
For I never considered of what I have,
But desired for what I need.
Unknowingly that this will never let me succeed.

Oh! My Lord do forgive me,
For my absurdity,
For me not recognizing Thy Glory,
For me being so greedy,
Unaware with the worser lives,
Of the needy.
We need not curse our fates,
For He, being the owner,
Is giving us grates.
Therefore we should be glee, because;
How fortunate are we!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashok Azad 06 July 2010

' for not recognizing thy glory, for me being so greedy'...absolutely! ..

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Aastha Uppal 06 July 2010

this piece of work is a mirror for all of us.. how we forget the blessings bestowed upon us and always are hungry for more than what we have or rather what we deserve.. this brilliant work of urs serves as a reminder how truly we are all blessed..accomplishment in life doesn't lie in possessions but lies in our level of satisfaction! ! ! great work! ! ! loved it...........

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Rabia Fazal 15 July 2010

Thank you friends for your ideas

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Anjali Sinha 31 July 2010

wowwwwwwww Rabia this is too good to come from a 14 year old excellent! ! ! ! ! do keep up such good work and ofcourse God Bless and lots of love from me to you. See how fortunate we are to meet here on Poemhunter Anjali

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Gul naz 23 July 2010

When I read the title How Fortunate Are We I thought that I should give it a read; when I read it I thought it was worth reading it.............nice one

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Afzal Shauq 21 July 2010

Oh! My Lord do forgive me, For my absurdity, For me not recognizing Thy Glory, For me being so greedy, Unaware with the worser lives, Of the needy. We need not curse our fates, For He, being the owner, Is giving us grates. Therefore we should be glee, because; How fortunate are we! so deep idea..this poem got...lovely poem..loved it 10/10

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Hans Vr 16 July 2010

Gratefulness for the apparently simple things is the true clue to happiness and peace of mind. There is so much wisdom in here that tomorrow I will ask my own children to read your poem. Congrats.

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Rabia Fazal 15 July 2010

thank you friends for commenting

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