Wednesday, November 16, 2011

The Day Has Come Comments

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The day has come we must part ways
You told me that you loved me and that I was the only one for you
But today you say that you love another
What am I to do
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Stephanie Conners
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Craig Mize 17 November 2011

I really liked this poem, you should your emotions and you invited us to feel what you felt. Keep writing, keep your head up, and don't worry things will get better. Love is one thing that I don't care how big, strong, and/or tough you are it can make you feel like the smallest and weakest thing on this earth. Don't worry you shall love again, we all do

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Unwritten Soul 17 November 2011

Could we sometimes believe some unreal word, the untrue promises..then broking your heart...i feel like someday you will find the best for you, like you said the new day has come sometimes we need to feel badly pain before we wake up and see the truth...maybe it the best...keep smile for the days that will come to you_Unwritten Soul

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