Monday, June 18, 2007

The Day You Were Born Comments

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The day you were born
and you took your first breath
I bet the skies were blue
And God's arms were outstretched
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JoAnn McGrath
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Theresa Moore 18 June 2007

A lovely poem. Sweet love for a newborn. A precious gift from God above. Beautiful write.

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Marci Made 18 June 2007

Hope someone was there because on the day I was born think it was just the Dr. making arrangements with his friend another Dr. to adopt me....I always think of the day I was born as the day I was given away.....I like your version of our birth much, much better...love, marci.

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Deborah 15 April 2022

It's too bad one can't post truth about their own adoption here!

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David Harris 18 June 2007

JoAnn, this a wonderful poem that brought tears to my eyes, but you'll never know the reason why, because I'm not telling on this one. Just to say it is a wonderful poem that was written right from the heart. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 18 June 2007

Beautiful JoAnn, Just a Beautiful write...10

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Gorgeous work, young lady....Jo Ann, you have indeed been Penning up a storm of poetic gems, these last 2 weeks.....The more power to you, my dear...keep it comin'! FjR

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