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Brittney Karasek

Oklahoma, United States.

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Oklahoma, United States.

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No closure.
No skies.
Everyone but me,
they're all able to cry.

It's like a poison,
bottled up inside.
I'm the coward,
when afraid, I will hide.

Barely coping,
I can barely breathe;
I'm told I'm choking.
On the outside I fake it,
On the inside I just can't take it.

Finally free;
Rest away.

Brittney Karasek

Tuesday, June 23, 2009

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 June 2009

No closure. No skies. Everyone but me, they're all able to cry. ..... they are able to cry but not me... so much frief stricken and choked and voice........ yes indeed pain in words and honest word mind it... well done, , , ,10

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Nooruddeen Mm 23 June 2009

A good poem, good flow. Nicely wrote. But Sad Rgds Nooruddeen

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