Saturday, April 19, 2008

The Dew Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dew will not be dew
If separated from the rose petal
Into water will it melt, like tear on the cheek
Into her languid look, the eyes in deep sadness
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Sadiqullah Khan
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masked lady 12 December 2009

BEAUTIFUL! 10+++. I was caught by these lines, so beautiful! The long night of separation Enters into dawn When the mist of her beauty Shall cover the earth And the red sun, Appear to give a beginning

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Reshma Ramesh 10 May 2009

beautiful......................

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