The Doomed Lovers Poem by Glory Sasikala

The Doomed Lovers

Rating: 5.0


He stood there leaning over,
With arm against darkened tree,
While she ran across, light and swift,
Anxious - and yet glad to be free.

He stood there admiring,
The golden sunset,
Yet turned sharply at the sound
Of her tinkling anklet.

Stopped short in full flight
She looked into his eyes,
Sheer joy of beholding!
And in his arms in a trice!

The Sunset and chirping birds,
Their charm failed to hold,
As she was his, and he was hers,
In their completed world.

And smiling understandingly,
The Sun did go down,
And gentle, smiling Moon cast spell,
In moonlight their love to drown.

The firmly rooted tree,
With protective branches, was their mother.
Guarding from wicked, grinning night eyes,
Them - made for each other.

Separating for a moment,
He said, "My precious love,
I'm sure no couple like us,
Forever and for now."

"Yes! " she agreed heartily,
"How perfectly we blend!
Heart for heart! Soul for soul!
With nothing to amend! "

"Such a wondrous union I'm sure
In Heaven can't be found,
If found, some flaw in them,
Some discord, I'll be bound."

"Oh dear! I do wonder,
What would happen then to us?
Should God look down and see our love,
And turn quite jealous.

Then such a rumble sounded,
That both looked up in fright,
The Heavens parted into two,
And lit up the dark night!

A lethal ray came flying,
And struck upon their head,
And within moments of their saying,
The lovers lay there dead.

The Doomed Lovers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 12 December 2021

Congratulations dear Glory Sasikala for this beautiful poem being judged Poem of the Day!

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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2021

A touching write-- Why such tragedy happens when there is true love and soul mingles with soul?

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Nabakishore Dash 08 December 2021

The poem is full of imagery, but the ending is pathetic.Deserves to be poem of day.Vety nice expression.

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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2021

It started out beautifully, but ended in tragedy. A poignant bit of verse nicely put together....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2021

Deeply poignant yet beautiful poem of love that holds us spellbound. Great imagery.

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