The Door Closed Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

The Door Closed

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I can hear
a cry, so loud
perhaps of a child
in close proximity.

Sure,
somewhere here
in the room
so deep and dark.

At some door
a sound
of knocking hard
again and again
I can hear
You may not!

Nothing clear
when asked
he insists
indicating a door, shut
hardly could I see
but, he was told about
so strong
can not be wrong.

The address he says
still puzzles me
as he cries louder
he says
a lip luxuriant
and arrogant
at the door mentioned
shakes her head at him
ridiculously
the door opens not.

The more I try console him
the more he cries louder
the address
can not be wrong
he claims
the door
can not be closed.

He left top job
in the bank promisingly
precious,
refused ticket
for election
from the party so popular
didn't go for
hunting with friends
so charming.

His love, so passionate
assured him
togetherness for ever
he had to leave
on the way
The love,
who'd dance
in tune of his song
He repents.

I can hear
a cry, so loud
perhaps, of a child
becomes louder and louder.

The door never opens.
I'd show him
the door, another
in dark to try
But,
where.....?
Do I know?
Who Knows? ? ?

Wednesday, November 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: door
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2017

At times we need to hopeful, which we fail to be so. Still trying hard with persistence pays. Wishing this door to open at some corner of the streets we have been roaming about on this map less life. 10+++ for the poem, Sir.

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Prativa Rani 01 November 2017

The address he says still puzzles me as he cries louder he says a lip luxuriant and arrogant at the door mentioned shakes her head at him ridiculously the door opens not. A poem that forces a reader to re-read and rethink. Thanks poet for the poem. 10++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 01 November 2017

Thanks dear prativa for you read and tried to reach the soul of the poem.I loved your nice comment. Binaya

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Binayakumar Mohanty 01 November 2017

I dedicate this poem to SUBHAS CHANDRA CHAKRA who could hear my cry within.

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