Spent the entire life
Counting the stars,
Everyone is so alike
From the near
And from the far.
Doesn't trust the
Oldest of them
'Cause it's shine
Has disappeared,
But forgot
It's the most experienced
And the most cleared.
We don't trust someone who is although less shiny but experienced enough to guide us. It's always about the right choice..in your poet's notes you have explained it so well. what you write is very true. look at the heart and the experience of goodness in them.. stars, shining, not so shining.. as example. very fine poem, well thought out. tony
Thank u. Look at the heart and the experience of goodness in them is something we should start learning. Your comments encourage me to write more.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is one of the best poems I have read in my life Totally love it