The Dull Stars Poem by Bhavika Jain

The Dull Stars

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Spent the entire life
Counting the stars,
Everyone is so alike
From the near
And from the far.
Doesn't trust the
Oldest of them
'Cause it's shine
Has disappeared,
But forgot
It's the most experienced
And the most cleared.

Tuesday, November 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,soul
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes we get attracted to someone because of it's outer beauty and start trusting them, until they might have broken us into pieces. We don't trust someone who is although less shiny but experienced enough to guide us. It's always about the right choice.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anushka 28 November 2018

This is one of the best poems I have read in my life Totally love it

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 November 2018

We don't trust someone who is although less shiny but experienced enough to guide us. It's always about the right choice..in your poet's notes you have explained it so well. what you write is very true. look at the heart and the experience of goodness in them.. stars, shining, not so shining.. as example. very fine poem, well thought out. tony

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Bhavika Jain 22 November 2018

Thank u. Look at the heart and the experience of goodness in them is something we should start learning. Your comments encourage me to write more.

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