πβ€οΈ Poem by Bhavika Jain
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I breathed uneasily in you
'Cause I was the ocean
And you were the cyclone.
You stretched me like a fabric
And torn my yarn apart,
I needed a tailor
To sew me again
But I couldn't be new
Like from the start.
I had to withstand the pain
My heart weakened from your words
I had to be my own tailor
And stitch myself, new as a cloth.
Wowwww I just love this poem. It is so well written and the meaning is sooo deep.
breathed uneasily in you My heart weakened from your words.. fine expressions of romance and love. thank you.
Wow! Great poetry, Bhavika. I can feel a wave of sincerity and poetic frustration in it. Thanks for your intimation.
I breathed uneasily in you 'Cause I was the ocean And you were the cyclone......the very first verses are wonderful. you are very creative dear Bhavika. this is a great gift of God. Accept it as a gift from above. When you die and go to heaven, God will ask you, . My daughter Bhavika, i gave u the great talent of creativity. What did u do with that gift. then you should be able to give him proper answer in all humility. So work hard and become a creative poetess. thank u. tony
Thanks a lot. I will for sure have a answer for God that will make him happy
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I would like to translate this poem
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You stretched me like a fabric And torn my yarn apart, wonderful imagination