The Ecstasy Beyond The Horizon Poem by Sanzeda S K

The Ecstasy Beyond The Horizon

Rating: 5.0


An empty horizon,
vastness of the infinite sky.
Clouds float above the desolate seascape.
A sudden swirling breeze softly
whispers and embraces
the solitude.
One's eyes are opened and bemused by
the reflection of a mystic crimson
shade onto the clement water.
Has no courage to lose the sight.
Colour blends a little by little and stirs the stillness of the serene
silent waves where the sky touches
the sea.
A divine last cosmic ray gleams
beyond the horizon before the darkness swallows the surreal vivid vicinity,
Perhaps it brings the eternal
ecstasy to the one's soul.

Monday, July 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: horizon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 27 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Sanzeda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Robert Murray Smith 16 July 2018

Excellent- - - +10 Welcome.

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Nevia 18 July 2018

Excellent👍

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Dr. Reefat Rubbi 18 July 2018

Excellent

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Mushtaque Ahmed 18 July 2018

Devine or divine

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Sanzeda Sultana 07 August 2018

Thanks a lot Mr. Dev for liking it . Tried my level best to make it more vivid and imagenative :

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Dev Anand 07 August 2018

Colour blends a little by little and stirs the stillness of the serene silent waves where the sky touches the sea. A divine last cosmic ray gleams.. from the beauty of the Horizon you go to the divine. very fine poem dear poetess.. dev

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Sanzeda S K 07 August 2018

Thank you so much Dr. Tony for your lovely remarks. Much obliged :

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 August 2018

sudden swirling breeze softly whispers and embraces the solitude. One's eyes are opened and bemused by the reflection of a mystic crimson shade onto the clement water......You h ave a poetic soul dear poetes.. wonderful description and very very poetic.. thank u. tony

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Sanzeda S K 27 July 2018

@ Mr Jazib Thanks for your remark. Will give feedback on your poem :)

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