The Edge Of The World Poem by Sheva Green

The Edge Of The World

Rating: 5.0


I run along the ocean shore,
Wind flying through my hair.
He takes my hand in his,
He holds it tight;
Never let go, never let go.

We run until the shoreline stops;
The edge of the world.
I stop short, he does not.
He is gone.

I now run along the ocean shore,
Wind flying through my hair.
I do not feel his hand reach for mine.
He does not hold it tight.
He is no longer with me.

I run until the shoreline stops;
The edge of the world.
I stand on the edge thinking.
The wind pushes my of the edge of the world.


I am gone too.
1.28.15

Friday, May 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,death,girl,love,ocean,wind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I had to write a connotative poem for English and decided to make it meaningful instead of what everyone else was writing. I hope you enjoy it. I worked very hard.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jmoney Bumble 05 May 2020

fantastic poem shevmoney. i will DEFINITELY be reading this to my kids in the future as a bedtime story. you rock! don't ever stop writing poetry. 😝😫

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jfizzle 05 May 2020

sick poem shevmoney. reading this to my kids as a future bedtime story. you rock! don't stop writing poetry! 😝😫

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Kelly Kurt 08 May 2015

A lovely poem, Sheva. But it shouldn't be work. Thanks for sharing

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Sheva Green 18 May 2015

Thanks so much! The support means a lot.

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Tango 08 May 2015

An excellent poem, hope to read more from you. Keep up the good work. Tango.

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