Friday, May 8, 2015

The Edge Of The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

I run along the ocean shore,
Wind flying through my hair.
He takes my hand in his,
He holds it tight;
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Sheva Green
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Jmoney Bumble 05 May 2020

fantastic poem shevmoney. i will DEFINITELY be reading this to my kids in the future as a bedtime story. you rock! don't ever stop writing poetry. 😝😫

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jfizzle 05 May 2020

sick poem shevmoney. reading this to my kids as a future bedtime story. you rock! don't stop writing poetry! 😝😫

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Kelly Kurt 08 May 2015

A lovely poem, Sheva. But it shouldn't be work. Thanks for sharing

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Sheva Green 18 May 2015

Thanks so much! The support means a lot.

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Tango 08 May 2015

An excellent poem, hope to read more from you. Keep up the good work. Tango.

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