Sunday, October 18, 2009

The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

when the world is darker than death
the sun extinguished
and the ashen seas undulating endlessly
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Nicole M. Martin
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Chang Yi Huang 21 October 2009

For one of ur poems, The End.That is a desperate poem that suggests the catastrophe of the end....but I like the end of the poem, somehow two people are still surving the crushing end. anyway this's a good poem! !

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Chang Yi Huang 21 October 2009

Here is a desperate poem that suggests the catastrophe of the end....but I like the end of the poem, somehow two people are still surving the crushing end. anyway this's a good poem! !

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Chang Yi Huang 21 October 2009

Here is a desperate poem that suggests the catastrophe of the end....but I like the end of the poem, somehow two people are still surving the crushing end. anyway this's a good poem! !

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