The Eyes When Burn Blue Poem by Dr subhendu kar

The Eyes When Burn Blue

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As her eyes when redeem first
The time yet excels ever all mundane
As she curves her smiles on her lips
As dappled of colors by the artist over the canvas.

As her eyes when beams brilliant
burned by the fire of blue vibrant
when blazed by the glaze of desire
eyes yet seems to be the art of the love

the heart as unleashed from the pain and sorrow
love when wrought in eyes raving in its room
yet but ravishing to the query of the lust
as luscious beams in resonance with the thrums

the prologue of the plexus of love and desire
when dazzled by the rhymes of blue moon as luminous
as no words to beauty as ever unequalled
when she embraces the heart in her stance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dawn Fuzan 14 May 2014

Dr, Amazing poetic style here, well done

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Patrice James 23 December 2007

another beautiful write, thanks for sharing.

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Ewigi Liebe 17 December 2007

If you should look into a starlit night and see a reflection of me know only that I will one day come crashing again to the shore swept homeward by the pull of the tide and you? These emotional words have touched me beyond expressions, I have myself lost the love of one that truly will always remain in my heart.

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Broken Peaces 12 December 2007

Dr. Sumptious piece of writting and as E. L. says we learn a lot by reading each others work, the understanding we gain is tremendous regards Chris voted

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Elizabeth Sheaffer 11 December 2007

I always enjoy reading poems written by people who aren't from the United States, and I don't wish this to offer offense against your nationality, because they open up my mind to new ways of thinking and writing that I otherwise would never be exposed to. In the end, I am improved as a writer, as a scholar, and as a human being. This is a lovely poem, and deserving of the utmost recognition. Warmest Regards, Eliza Stine

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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