The Fake Snake Poem by James Metcalfe

The Fake Snake

Rating: 3.8


It was green, it was shiny, it was long.
What was it? Something was wrong.
Laying still in the sun, it gently hissed
From its yellow head came a fine mist.
Poisonous spit? Venomous tears?
This green demon giver of fears,
But no! I won't give into this dread,
A true warrior will make sure it is dead!
With heroic courage I grabbed it's tail
this deadly dangerous deed could not fail
SMASH SMASH then I froze!
It wasn't a snake it was my garden hose.

Sunday, September 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: snake
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A quick poem about a fake snake. I've tried to write this to include the parts required for a Key Stage 3 homework my daughter is doing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 23 November 2018

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! You caught me by surprise and I take pride in that not happening to me very often at all! You get a 10+ for that adroitly handled piece!

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Chinedu Dike 28 October 2018

Well articulated and nicely brought forth. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing James.

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Solomon Senxer 20 September 2018

Looks like you do not want a snake! Me too btw!

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Michael Mc Dermott 16 September 2018

a good twist to a daunting situation. well done James

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Michael Mc Dermott 16 September 2018

a good twist to daunting situation. well done James

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