Sunday, September 16, 2018

The Fake Snake Comments

Rating: 3.8

It was green, it was shiny, it was long.
What was it? Something was wrong.
Laying still in the sun, it gently hissed
From its yellow head came a fine mist.
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James Metcalfe
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Susan Williams 23 November 2018

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! You caught me by surprise and I take pride in that not happening to me very often at all! You get a 10+ for that adroitly handled piece!

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Chinedu Dike 28 October 2018

Well articulated and nicely brought forth. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing James.

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Solomon Senxer 20 September 2018

Looks like you do not want a snake! Me too btw!

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Michael Mc Dermott 16 September 2018

a good twist to a daunting situation. well done James

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Michael Mc Dermott 16 September 2018

a good twist to daunting situation. well done James

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