The Falling Stars Poem by ritty patnaik

The Falling Stars

Rating: 5.0


the falling stars,
clad in red and purple
hanging little lanterns
downwards bloom!

looking like a dancer
on her tiptoe glides
all along the cottage
so wild.

fuschia the falling stars in red
always my love
till iam dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 27 December 2009

Another well penned poem, wow, it reminds me of the poem 'A FALLING STAR' dedicated to the woman who I loved so much but broke my heart....and she behind most my love poems....keep it up! 10++++

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