ritty patnaik

Rookie - 41 Points (6th july 1952 / cuttack)

The Falling Stars - Poem by ritty patnaik

the falling stars,
clad in red and purple
hanging little lanterns
downwards bloom!

looking like a dancer
on her tiptoe glides
all along the cottage
so wild.

fuschia the falling stars in red
always my love
till iam dead.


Comments about The Falling Stars by ritty patnaik

  • Romeo Della Valle (12/27/2009 2:21:00 PM)


    Another well penned poem, wow, it reminds me of the poem 'A FALLING STAR' dedicated to the woman who I loved so much but broke my heart....and she behind most my love poems....keep it up! 10++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 27, 2009



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