The Flame Poem by James Crandall

The Flame

Rating: 4.3


Flame
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No compass to guide me.
No bearing can I find.
Wandering the desert sand,
A drifting, shifting waste.

No moon to brighten up the night.
I pray for sundown's haste.
But Sundown he's a comin' soon,
He has a job to do.
To cast his pitchy shadow
O'er the bleary, bleary land.

Dark of night befalls me.
A treading, dreading gloom.
I cry out to the heavens,
Please take away the loom!

The raven chill encases me.
Oh Lord, please set me free!
Alone in the desert night,
No guiding light I see.

Footsteps crunch the desert sand,
Muffling sound of breeze.
Pinhole ray of light ahead,
That sets my heart at ease.

A spark!
A spark!
Spark to a wick.
Tiny little twinkle.
Candle newly lit.

Beyond the golden teardrop glow,
The flame she glows so bright.
Hungry tongues of fire reach
And lick away the night.

Darkness fled around me.
No longer walking blind.
Lighting up the desert sky,
The flame burns clean and chaste.

Flame, she pushed away the night.
She had no time to waste.
Cause Sunup, she's a comin' soon,
She has a job to do.
To cast off Sundown's shadow
O'er the cheery, cheery land.

Friday, April 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 21 April 2018

Beautiful poem, well conceived and elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme from the heart. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing James.

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Robert Murray Smith 20 April 2018

A fair offering. You have a lot of work to do to achieve your potential. Read the great poets. And write five poems a day on varied subjects. Eventually, your style as a poet will come through. Good poeting.

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James Crandall 21 April 2018

Thank you Robert. I appreciate the advice and encouragement.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2018

Footsteps crunch the desert sand, Muffling sound of breeze. Pinhole ray of light ahead, That sets my heart at ease. Darkness and spark and flame and ur wonderful description......... thalnk u for this fine poem. tony

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James Crandall 21 April 2018

Thank you Tony.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2018

Dear James, such a lovely write...10++++

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James Crandall 21 April 2018

Thank you Bernard.

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