The Flame.... Poem by Samanwaya Njaaneya

The Flame....

Rating: 5.0


The flame...
not in his eyes....
but in his system....(PC)
but it will..
put out...
once.....
when his code....
effective to...
console his mind....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 28 August 2009

The title and the few lines say it all. Nice theme.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 September 2008

Oh wide eyed beauty! This is beauty! ! ! ! sathya narayana

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

a 10 for this inflaming composition, Fine.

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Gone with the wind 31 July 2008

Surely it has something within....I aren't much sure...but the short lines and simple language is itself a tree..bearing fruits...and living alone...it was a very warm write

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premji premji 23 July 2008

Good write, Sumayya...

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